Kiss In The Rain

Okay. I agree with everyone that this was waaaayyyy way confusing. But, I found that it added character to your piece. It was one of those stories where it is ...

This was very well written, and I can very much relate. I know you're worried, but if she's still in love with him after four years, that means she was ...

Whoa, what a freakkkkk!!! Vampire thing is awesome, I love it already, but I hate that Jessie is totally a jerk vampire :(. He sounds really hot, lol. One other ...

Another great chapter; short, but sweet and to the point. But they're getting married a day after they met? ...a little weird. But otherwise fantastic :). Here are a couple ...

Hey, yay, this is beautifully written :). I think that it is very brave of Susannah to choose Jessie over her parents' wishes. Another great chapter, and I don't know ...

Another spectacular read. I really enjoy Jessie, for I know a man most like him, haha :lol:. I am a little confused, though. I am assuming that this takes place ...

I found this quite intriguing, Kay Kay :). I loved how you began this with a letter, it was unique and exciting, and it immediately caught my attention. This was ...

Another fantastic chapter :). Your fight scene was beautifully written, and Shanzi is pretty awesome, if I do say so myself. I find Anna really kind of annoying, lol. But ...

Haha, I agree with springrain on the part of Jinn eating the chicken bone. It made me laugh at the picture. I am really enjoying this, it's a fantastic read ...

:) This was fantastic. I really love your main character's name: Lachlan. It's very unique and I like the sound of it. I think that you have a very interesting ...

Wow. I thinks that's all I can say. Thank you for being vague in this prologue; as Springrain said, prologues are supposed to be vague, but for some reason most ...

Hiya, I found this really captivating. The vagueness of it made it really intriguing. However, I agrea with happybear, that it was too short. I understand that prologues are supposed ...

:D This was funny. Quite ironic for Fatty to fall in love with a girl over a fart, no? But it is possible, I suppose. People fall in love for ...

Hello. I'm Kiss In The Rain, and this has gotten off to a great start! :). Lets start with the grammar: A wave of relief swept over him when he ...

Beautiful, J, beautiful. I truly loved the perspective, and there were only a few grammatical mistakes (:) but you know that, don't you? lol). I would have been surprised if ...